Is this a good letter?

[sweetchick]

Thanks for your guys advice!!! Im going to take the red out to see how he reacts but even if he responds good im dying it back lol... im not changing for him!!!!

[eightball61]

Whats the letter going to do? Am i missing something here? :confused:

Why don't you read through all your post again, think about what he had done to you, how he has ignored you, and mislead you.........

You are only 19 and you don't need to be suckered this early into your life. Learn from this mistake and move on. You have giving this a try before and it has failed twice. In my opinion its time to leave so you don't get hurt anymore than you allready are.

[Rich]

The letter sounds fine except that I would change that last part about that "he SHOULD come over". That part sounds like you're ordering him to come over.

Change it to read that "hopefully you can come over to see me tonight".

That you'll have your door and legs opened for him.

Just kidding. A little humor here. :-)

Your letter is fine except for the part that I mentioned.

Rich